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Old 15-01-2014, 04:52 AM   #1
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Hello guys!
This is my latest anatomy study. Based on a piece by the american sculptor Edward McCartan (1879–1947). It was a great exercise and I learned a lot.
Now into the next one!
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Old 15-01-2014, 07:29 AM   #2
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Beautiful Fabio...!!!
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I was seeing a photo of this sculpture minutes ago, great execution.
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Old 15-01-2014, 04:24 PM   #4
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Love the anatomy in the sculpt. It feels like you captured the original well while maybe adding in a few more realistic qualities. The torso for example feels a bit more simplified in the original then the one you've created. I'm fine with that. I like where you've taken it. The only thing that bug's me is the face. It feel's just a bit too heavy handed. The cheek bone for example feels very large, making it feel a little masculine. Her eye lid's are very thick which take away from the delicate nature of the female. Then the last thing would be that sense she's controposto one butt cheek crease should be creased while the other (relaxed leg) would be pulled and have less of a crease. Crit's aside great work!
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Kind of agree with Craig notes! Especially on the face, it was the first negative thing popping when I saw her, it also actually makes her looking older than Edward McCartan work. +1 for the realtime model, appreciated!

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Thanks a lot guys. Comments and critics most welcome.
For my next studies IŽll focus on those ares and try to improve them.

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Impressive. really great sculpt
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beautiful copy Fabio. I agree about the age of the face, McCartan's model feels to be almost a girl rather than a woman
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