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Old 07-05-2017, 09:36 AM   #1
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I am working on a personal project for which I am doing a Marx impression.
Do you have some suggestions what to tackle to make it better?
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Something that would help is the lighting. If you try to light the scene, the same way that a photographer would do.
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I agree with Cyrus,
I like the dramatic shadow but it could use a stronger rim light to get it off the background. Try to experiment with the size and strength of the key light. Maybe look for similar lighting on pinterest and try to match it.
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