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Old 24-11-2011, 08:00 AM   #1
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Pimp your works!

Just make sure to post actual constructive critiques, no praises
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Old 24-11-2011, 08:03 AM   #2
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Just to get things going i'l repost this from my sketchbook




i got stuck on this character some time ago, so any C&C on design,anatomy, is greatly appreciated
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Old 24-11-2011, 10:23 AM   #3
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Good thread idea, I just edited your first post to get a nice little logo on the thread.
Regarding your character, the face looks pretty good, I'd watch the wrists, they feel a bit bent and lack some bone structure. If you're not planning on simulating the cloth, I'd put him in the final pose before sculpting the folds. Keep it up!
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Old 24-11-2011, 09:48 PM   #4
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Really cool design, I love the face and the fact that he has one bad eye. Maybe you can play that a bit more by giving him a scar on his bad eye. It would bring some nice asymmetry to the face and give the character a bit more story. Also do you plan on rigging him or are you just going to pose him? I am just asking because he is pigeon toed and that might cause a problem when rigging.

Also since this is a sticky, is this meant for all of us to post on? I know the title suggests "What Are You Working On?" but I just want to check and I don't want to intrude on others posts. I am somewhat new here and I just want to make sure.

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Old 24-11-2011, 10:09 PM   #5
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Also since this is a sticky, is this meant for all of us to post on? I know the title suggests "What Are You Working On?" but I just want to check and I don't want to intrude on others posts.
Hey Rizzi, yes that's the idea, everyone can post whatever they're working on, an informal way to show your wips. Less scary than creating your own thread I suppose

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cool Idea
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Old 24-11-2011, 11:26 PM   #7
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Hey Rizzi, yes that's the idea, everyone can post whatever they're working on, an informal way to show your wips. Less scary than creating your own thread I suppose

cheers!
Thanks for the clarification Pascal.

As for the Mask model:

I like your Mask model, you lucked out cause he doesn't really have ears. One thing is that the hat doesn't seem like it is fitted on his head, it seem like the geometry is just penetrating through the head. I would also push the expression a lot more, that character is known for his crazy expressions.


So this is what I am working on. This is Peter, he is a boy who turns into a cat and has some cat adventures. The story is from a children's book titled "Jennie" (also titled "The Abandoned",) and this is my first attempt with maya fur. I will also be doing a boy version of peter and I will be starting him next week so stay tuned.



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Old 25-11-2011, 10:24 AM   #8
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Hey rizzy. Cool cat I'm not so sure about the human eyes though. They throw me off a bit but I see he's a human transformed into a cat.

cool thread!! I was going to wait till I was farther along on this piece to create a thread for it. but since this is a what are you working on. I guess I'll post here to start this up. its still pretty rough. so yeah this is what i'm working on

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Wow man!
Cool idea!

@shansen
Cool model, nice pose and torso twist.
Can you post a close of the character?

@MJG

Very cool, you should work a little bit more onde the ears, and i agree with pascal about the wrists.
Keep it up!

This is a model that I've started working last week, lots of things to do, but here it is:

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C&C are very welcome!

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Here's a repost from my sketch book..

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