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Old 30-08-2010, 10:57 PM   #1
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Hey guys. So thought I would start a junk thread. I'll just post random stuff in here. Hopefully some of it will be decent :P. Here's the 1st dump..
No smooths on this. It was a topo exercise. I hope to actually make something from this. Not sure what though..




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Old 30-08-2010, 11:12 PM   #2
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and uv's.. Please crit .

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Old 30-08-2010, 11:30 PM   #3
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Nice work Brett! Glad to see you opened a sketchbook thread
The neck muscles look a bit deep for a neutral pose to me, and the elbow area silhouette seems slightly off. Like if the arm was too thick there, or like the arm muscles were running too high from the back view. Great face, and nice topology, keep it up
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Thanks for the crits Pascal. Yea I think his brachioradialis muscle is too big and elbow is a bit off at the bottom. I agree about the neck too. I still want too take this through mudbox . But want to get a decent base to work from 1st.
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Old 31-08-2010, 02:52 AM   #5
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Great to see you posting Brett. I wouldn't dream of critiquing you at this stage, I haven't got a blaaady clue about muscle groups or owt. Perhaps when you get rendering and texturing.

I can't wait to see how this turns out!
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This is a FWIP . Hope you like it. All rendered in one pass with mental ray. Because I totally suck at comp :P. The shirt is old I have a newer version.

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Ace update Brett! Love the details and the hair works really well.
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Some more junk for my trunk...

Got some time to work on this again. Decided to make my "default man" an astronaut. I'm still working out a few designery things. The story is that he crash landed on a planet (that has oxygen... luckily) Also did a texture test using mudbox. Loving mudbox texture tools . I haven't got round to sculpting the body though. I have fixed the elbow area. Hope its better

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Great stuff Brett! I like the astronaut suit, keep it up
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