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Old 30-04-2012, 07:07 AM   #1
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hi guys
here is a new model i start to work on
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Old 03-05-2012, 07:34 PM   #2
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I just love this guy great work.. All you want to do is hug this guy!
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Old 03-05-2012, 11:21 PM   #3
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LOL ha ha

TobyD: thank alot for your comment
i really love your work

tha pirate is a part of a concept art im doing in zbrush for a game that me and my partners r develop

here are some more zsketch that i'm working on for this game
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Old 04-05-2012, 04:10 AM   #4
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Great stuff! I really like the pirate & this little guy
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Old 05-05-2012, 11:01 PM   #5
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new speed sculpt from this morning
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Old 07-05-2012, 09:58 AM   #6
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I like the pirate overall, however his arms and fingers are bugging me. Seen from a front view it's like he has 4 arms. I understand you're trying to make him look old and wrinkled around the arms but the overall shapes feel too segmented to the point where it's distracting. For such a cartoony character I am thinking you could probably do without that much definition and realistic detail to avoid that disconnect. The fingers could also use some more definition too but maybe you haven't gone there just yet.

I like the idea, it's got a bit of a One Piece feel to it. Good Luck!
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