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Old 13-04-2012, 10:25 AM   #1
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Hi everyone! So here's an image I've been working on and off for some time now. Finally decided it was time to get it done. Going for a dystopian/blade runner-esque future type of image. Any and all feedback and suggestions are highly appreciated. Thanks!
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Old 14-04-2012, 01:24 AM   #2
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Great ! I love the alien sculpt !!
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Old 14-04-2012, 04:44 AM   #3
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Great work so far, but I'm a little disturbed by how the alien's organs protrude so much. I think it would look better if it didn't go further out than his chest.

Don't forget to add some sort of cheesy advertisement like "Live the good life in the offworld colonies." to contrast with the grime and trash.
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Great Alien ! nice sculpted, i just think that the belly area are underdeveloped comparing to other areas.

I sense a great image coming out of this
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