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Old 14-12-2010, 11:40 PM   #11
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Old 15-12-2010, 11:50 AM   #12
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Old 15-12-2010, 12:15 PM   #13
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Cool update. I would have the smoke a bit thicker so we get more volumetric detailing, a bit more like this


Is it an alien structure covered by smoke or a small alien craft controlling the smoke?

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Old 16-12-2010, 05:55 AM   #14
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hey pascal! I still don't know!!
either its an alien sphere in the head and the rest is smoke
or maybe i will give hints of an alien metal structure under the smoke at places...like a giant biped structure covered in smoke
I don't know what's coolest
I will anyway rework the smoke a bit more...

some people told me its too buzy...perhaps i should get rid of some tanks and copters??

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Old 18-12-2010, 02:51 AM   #15
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hey friends
here's the latest update
reworked a bit of everything

there's a hint of the underneat structure now...
tell me what you think about it
(there's also a version without the big blue ray from the "head")

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Old 18-12-2010, 04:36 AM   #16
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Hi
wow this is already looking great !!
looking forward to next update
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Old 18-12-2010, 12:04 PM   #17
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ok guys here I am with another update...
*hope you like it
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Old 20-12-2010, 01:42 AM   #18
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ok ,I think I will call this update the final submission
hope you'll enjoy it!
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