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Nymuh
19-03-2010, 07:24 AM
Hello, this is my first post here ^^.

I am very pleased to participate in this contest.

My concept is a cannon girl pin-up with a retro suit navy.

It was a good opportunity for me to beginning with rapid sketch.
http://uppix.3dvf.com/images/canongirls.jpg

I made these sketches for think for my pose with my future 3D scene.
Now, I will make my model on ZBrush.

THANKS!

tonytrout
22-03-2010, 07:28 PM
Nice idea, I like the sound of naval uniform perched on a cannon. :) Girls and guns all ways a winner. keep it up

Nymuh
25-03-2010, 09:12 AM
Thank you for the comment.

I'm sorry I made a mistake in the word cannon, I forgot an "N" if it is possible to change the title, thank you.

This is the face yet in ZBrush, and hope you like it.
http://uppix.3dvf.com/images/cannongirl.jpg
http://uppix.3dvf.com/images/cannonryr.jpg

PascalR
25-03-2010, 10:15 AM
interesting idea, a few things about the head:

I would check the upper eyelid thickness, it looks like it's getting very thin towards the eye corners.The lower eyelid seems to crash into the cornea mesh which makes the curvature a bit wobbly in the center.
Eyebrows ridge seems a bit too sharp , but depends how stylized you want to go.
The lower lip looks pinched towards the corners, I would make sure there is no gap between the 2 lips at the mouth corners. The lower line of the lower lip is too sharp at the mouth corners.
The jaw seems too wide from the perspective view and the ears could use some more work as detailing goes.

Hope this helps, keep it up!:beerchug:

PascalR
25-03-2010, 10:17 AM
Oh and I've just fixed the title ;)