Zakk Sketch Book 2d/3d

[Zakk_M]

Hey Guys, Just looking to start posting work and sketches as much as possible now. Looking for as much crits and feedback as possible, hopefully going soak up as much information and knowledge as i can from the massive amount of talented people already on this site! Thanks alot
So here's the start.. Btw the drawings a pretty old and really were the only things i have scanned at the moment .. the scanner at my school is a big piece O' Crap.

http://i679.photobucket.com/albums/vv157/Zakkm/Feb20_AngryFace_Plane_Sculpt.jpg

http://i679.photobucket.com/albums/vv157/Zakkm/Skull_feb6.jpg

http://i679.photobucket.com/albums/vv157/Zakkm/Head_Sculpt_1.jpg


http://i679.photobucket.com/albums/vv157/Zakkm/Monster_sketch.jpg
http://i679.photobucket.com/albums/vv157/Zakkm/4legCreatureconcept.jpg

[PascalR]

:welcome:Zakk!

Cool sketches! Here are a few comments from me: I would push in/forward the mouth corners of the screaming face. A wide open mouth wouldn't be that wide imho. The skin is supposed to get a lot of tension there.
The skull looks pretty good and I would just go back to the third head's lips, nostrils and ears. For the mouth, I would fill the gap between the upper and lower lips towards the mouth corners as they feel tight in the middle( you could actually have a gap in the middle but not in the corners)

Keep it up!

cheers

P.

[Zakk_M]

Hey Pascal Thanks very much your critiques, I totally miss that tightness in the corner of the mouth in the screaming face.. makes total sense now, I will make sure to keep that in mind now. Mouths are always something i always have trouble with. Just got to practice more and more studies.. thanks