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tiktok
02-15-2010, 11:21 AM
here's my pinup start. Still a ways to go; the pose, its rhythm and the wieght still need a lot of work
:bouncy:
-bayard

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PascalR
02-15-2010, 07:06 PM
Very nice start:drool:I know it is still wip, so not sure if I should mention the ears, hands?
Nice to see other entries in this challenge :thumbsup:

Look forward to the next update

Cheers

P.

sebcravoisier
02-16-2010, 07:18 AM
and nice model too!
but like pascal said the hand and... no the ear looks good to me!
with the hair it depend of you hair style!

Manuel Poehlau
02-16-2010, 10:17 PM
That looks promising. Good work on the face and the pose.
I would try to push in the lats area, I think the transition to the upperarm looks to straight/smooth?! And the shoulder muscle needs more volume.
Keep working! :thumbsup:

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tonytrout
02-17-2010, 04:41 AM
I agree with Manuel, the breadth across the back looks a bit mannish to me and overall I think the figure needs to be softened up with a bit of fat here and there. I like the pose. Keep it up :thumbsup:

Aumakua
03-21-2010, 12:56 PM
She's got a killer look, very lustful and remote together :) keep it coming!