Marine guy

[Ernesto Marrero]

I am just finishing my year at Think Tank Training Center and this is my first out of three Demo real pieces. There will be more coming. I know there are things that I didn't get to fix and things that could be better. It was the first time that I went throw the entire process of making a character. But over all I was happy with it. It would be awesome to know what you guys think so feel free to leave a comment.

Here it is
http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/4163/marinecomp.jpg (http://img827.imageshack.us/i/marinecomp.jpg/)

http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/2904/leftcloseups.jpg (http://img4.imageshack.us/i/leftcloseups.jpg/)

this are two frames of the turn table

http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/6470/photorotation.jpg (http://img811.imageshack.us/i/photorotation.jpg/)

http://www.cgfeedback.com/cgfeedback/attachment.php?attachmentid=4167&stc=1&d=1292761256

sculpt
http://www.cgfeedback.com/cgfeedback/attachment.php?attachmentid=4186&stc=1&d=1292818268


Gun
http://www.cgfeedback.com/cgfeedback/attachment.php?attachmentid=4168&stc=1&d=1292761339

and this is the concept by Yuriy Mazurkin
http://www.cgfeedback.com/cgfeedback/attachment.php?attachmentid=4169&stc=1&d=1292761370
http://cghub.com/images/view/44219/

[tonytrout]

I would have to say he looks a tad more relaxed in the concept, but really beautifully done. Great model. clap

[Ernesto Marrero]

yea I agree the vest its really tight

[MJG]

yeaah booii:bouncy: looking sick man.

if anything i would say the render looks a bit flat, for example the materials could have been pushed more for more variation. just a thought for next time

[Ernesto Marrero]

i think the dirt layer is making it a bit flat in color. this is with out the dirt it looks less flat I think
http://www.cgfeedback.com/cgfeedback/attachment.php?attachmentid=4187&stc=1&d=1292820616

[Infinite]

This is assassins creed, Ubisoft quality! :thumbsup:

[Ernesto Marrero]

I was inspired by assassin's creed am happy to hear that. Thanks for the the complements :rofl:

[Rishi]

Excellent:thumbsup:

[PascalR]

:sw:plugged:sw:

[Intervain]

Nice model there :) I like the lighting a lot. Not too keen on the vest wrinkling on the side - it looks like it's made of a rubberized material or like a tight bra ;) Also the wood on the gun could do with some bump:thumbsup: great job.

[collings]

I was inspired by assassin's creed am happy to hear that. Thanks for the the complements :rofl:

being one of the character modelers who has worked on AC2 and brotherhood, i must tell you that when i saw your model i said to myself "this model could have fit in the game , well done " :D

I have to agree though that the vest looks to tight compared to the concept.
Also i really like the sleeve texture but the rest of the clothes look a bit too uniform , it could have use some more work just like you did on the sleeve.

[Ernesto Marrero]

thanks for the feedback guys also I agree Intervain the vest its a bit strange am also not shore if a vest with the shoulders like that is possible. I had some trouble finding something like it.

[KonginChains]

this is great for a first timer on a character model... you are really talented..
For critiques, apart from the others, i think his facial features and character would be better expressed if he looked as relaxed as in the concept. The quality of the texture and shading for the face and skin could also be better.

keep it up, and keep em' coming..

[togeux]

Hello,
very nice character!
how you made for the displacement on Vray?
setup in max?

thanks

[Ernesto Marrero]

Togeus This was rendered in mental ray in SoftImage but am planing on using Vray for my next character I dont know how to use it yet thou.

[Ernesto Marrero]

I posted some new images here. finally finished rendering a turn table. Also just posted the second model of my reel In a new thread called Dark Knight.